THE AUTUMN WITCHING HILL
THE AUTUMN WITCHING HILL
Just crowned, her first day as queen.
They bow to her.
With bare feet and silk gown staining,
she flees faraway
to where untamed roots give rise
to impossible beauties.
She requests the counsel she needs.
Tinder tangles into an ordinary brass key
that she swallows.
It tastes of smoldering seeds.
With no court watching
she drinks slanted sunlight,
gilded sky,
burnished hills,
the goddess tea of crisp gold grass.
Her confusion ebbs.
Bent by heavenly gusts
she bows
to a pocket of slight stems
crowned by florid stars. She listens.
She leaps and picks.
Her choice:
Wind in trees
above fame and jewels,
birdspeech over wished-for youth.
Her people are best served
by what is real.
This, she decides, is her creative will.
Yet why make proclamation
when her woman’s nature is to invoke?
Inspiration is her way.
The wind blows and takes her hair,
she turns to autumn copper.
The earth takes and decomposes her name.
Her soul turns to soil, the two indistinguishable.
Now she knows.
She is sunbeam much more than she is queen.
Now she chooses—
Not to be revered royalty
but to be witched and revere.
This poem is inspired by the Edmund Dulac art seen here, which I believe is an illustration for Beauty And The Beast. I made my own meaning of it.
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~Cricket
22 Comments
Kate
Gorgeous! Love the words, love Dulac!
Cricket Baker
Thank you, Kate! I love Edmund Dulac’s illustrations, too 🙂
Julie
I love the alliteration you put in your poem: tinder tangles, smoldering seeds, slanted sunlight. Evocative writing.
Cricket Baker
I love playing with the sounds of words 🙂 Thank you, Julie!
Jacqueline Da Costa
Beautiful! I love the changing of the seasons. Each season has its own message and this is spoken freely to all that listen.
Cricket Baker
Indeed! Autumn carries a spirit in the air that fills me with a mysterious anticipation. Thank you, Jacqueline xxxx
Barbara Tong
Thank you so much for the words and the picture .They both set me dreaming and feeling the Autumn that is coming with it’s mystery , melancholy and beauty . Gratitude for the journey .
Cricket Baker
You are so welcome, Barbara, and isn’t it wonderful to be dreaming and feeling the autumn mystery? 🙂
Karen
Reminds me of my soul and a long ago memory, that sits just below my awareness. Love the way this feels. Beautiful poem, Thank you.
Cricket Baker
Mmmm, sounds like a delicious sensation, Karen! Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂
Paulene Kilsby
This is beautiful and thank you Cricket. It perfectly captures that mellow feeling as the seasons merge and the balmy days of Summer give way to the anticipation of the cold crisp Winter months ahead. I love Autumn – that glorious mellow “in between” time – and your poem personifies this while the illustration compliments it perfectly Bless you and go well. 🙏🍁🍂🧡x
Cricket Baker
I love autumn, too, my favorite time of year. I’m glad you enjoyed the poem, Pauline! 🙂
Lynne
I just love your poems and stories – please don’t stop sharing them with us
Cricket Baker
This makes me very happy, thank you, Lynne!! I intend to keep sharing as long as they come to me 🙂
Patricia J Spencer
I’m quite shy as a solitary, but I love your work~
Kindred Spirits can’t help but be drawn to your voice
Staying tuned thank you
Cricket Baker
And we are kindred spirits, sounds like, as I also love solitude and can hardly be dragged to a party! Thank you for letting me know you appreciate my work, Patricia xxxx
Maria
Thank you for this beautiful poem. I am not a great fan of poetry but I can feel and see withte picture the beauty you describe, so again thank you.
Cricket Baker
How kind of you to let me know, Maria! I’m so happy you could picture the beauty 🙂
Mary Whalen
It’s absolutely lovely.
Cricket Baker
Oh, I’m so happy you think so, Mary 🙂 Thank you for letting me know!
Natasha
Beautiful words. This took root in my heart, being a lover of autumn & all things nature & Witcher! Thank you x
Cricket Baker
Thank you for letting me know, Natasha! That sounds lovely to me. xxxx